Poor text in location portal
Testing with ASHPD, the location portal looks like this:
- The description largely repeats the heading.
- The two paragraphs are a bit awkward, and one of them is ellisized.
- The repetition of "access" is a bit noisy and inelegant.
- The heading says "give" but the buttons say "grant".
Suggestions for how to improve the dialog text can be found in the portals mockups, but copying here for reference: