Update labels
I've reviewed the existing labels as part of #17 (closed).
Welcome to <distro>
Hi there! If you are new to GNOME, you can take the tour to learn some essential features.
- "some essential features" sounds a bit vague
- "you can" is rather passive
Open Activities to start apps
You can also view open windows, search and use workspaces
- "search" is dangling - search for what? What are workspaces?
- seems a bit odd just to mention app launching in the header
In the Activities Overview, just start typing to search
Search can be used to launch apps, find settings, do calculations and much more.
- missing comma before "and much more"
- What's the activities overview? It hasn't been introduced
"Click the time to see your now and next"
This includes notifications, media controls, calendar events, the weather and world clocks.
- "Now and next" is vague; people seem to dislike the marketing-speak.
- That list of features is too long.
View system information and settings
Get an overview of the system status and quickly change settings.
- Seems fine
Find and install apps
The Software app makes it easy to find and install all the apps you need.
- Find and install apps - how? Use software to find and install apps; Discover great apps through search, browsing and our recommendations.
- Contrast between the app icon and the background is a bit low here
That's it! To learn more, see the Help
The help app contains information, tips and tricks.
- If this is about help, it would be good to include a help icon?
- "the Help"?