Commit 16e05c65 authored by Michael Catanzaro's avatar Michael Catanzaro

Polish throughout

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<title>GNOME OS</title>
<p>GNOME OS is a virtual machine image designed to facilitate development
and testing of GNOME. It is not intended to replace traditional Linux
distributions. To try out GNOME OS for yourself, follow <link href="#">these
instructions</link>. Due to recent changes in <app>Boxes</app>’s support for
UEFI, you must use <app>Boxes</app> 3.38 to run GNOME OS images; older
versions of <app>Boxes</app> will not work.</p>
distributions. <link href="https://gnome-build-meta.s3.amazonaws.com/3.38.0/gnome_os_installer.iso">
Try out GNOME OS for yourself.</link> Due to recent changes in
<app>Boxes</app>’s support for UEFI, you must use <app>Boxes</app> 3.38 to
run GNOME OS images; older versions of <app>Boxes</app> will not work.</p>
<media type="image" src="figures/welcome-to-gnome-os.png">GNOME OS Welcome</media>
</section>
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<p>libhandy is a library providing high-quality GTK widgets with a
focus on adaptive and mobile-friendly user interfaces. GNOME 3.38 includes
libhandy 1.0, which brings many new widgets, such as <code>HdyDeck</code>
and <code>HdyWindow</code>. libhandy 1.0 release is parallel-installable
and <code>HdyWindow</code>. The libhandy 1.0 release is parallel-installable
with the earlier libhandy 0.0 API series.</p>
</section>
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<cmd>rust-analyzer</cmd>
instead of <cmd>rls</cmd>.</p></item>
<item><p>Support for tracing with sysprof has been integrated in GLib,
libsoup and pango.</p></item>
libsoup, and pango.</p></item>
<item><p>Glade now supports GJS widgets, automatic loading of composition
templates, and improved deprecation checks using version data from
introspection.</p></item>
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</section>
<section id="gnome-tour">
<title>New “Welcome” tour</title>
<p>GNOME 3.38 comes with a new “Welcome” tour, shown at first login, after
the initial setup. The tour primarily provides onboarding for new users, but
it also serves to give a nice welcome to users in their first session.</p>
<title>New Welcome Tour</title>
<p>GNOME 3.38 comes with a new <app>Welcome</app> tour, shown at first
login, after the initial setup. The tour primarily provides onboarding for
new users, but it also serves to give a nice welcome to users in their
first session.</p>
<media type="image" src="figures/welcome-tour.png">Welcome tour</media>
<p>The Welcome tour is an example of a GNOME application that is written in
Rust.</p>
<p>The <app>Welcome</app> tour is written in Rust.</p>
</section>
<section id="settings">
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<app>Games</app> now supports Nintendo 64 games as a result of some
improvements to <sys>libretro</sys>. Finally, <app>Games</app> is more
stable now, running games in a secondary process. If a game or emulator
crashes now, the main application won't.</p>
crashes now, the main application wont.</p>
</section>
<section id="utilities">
<title>Utilities</title>
<p><app>Screenshot</app> and <app>Sound Recorder</app> have been redesigned
to provide a more polished and elegant experience. This includes .</p>
to provide a more polished and elegant experience.</p>
<media type="image" src="figures/screenshot-and-sound-recorder.png">Screenshot and Sound Recorder</media>
</section>
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application sandbox more secure by allowing control over what kinds of
data your apps can search and query.</p></item>
<item><p><app>Fractal</app> has improved video playback in the message
history. Previews of videos are now shown directly message, and clicking
on a video will open it in a larger viewer. Audio files are now seekable
in the improvde audio file player. The message history has been improved
too. Edited messages are now edited in place, with an icon to indicate the
edited status, while redacted messages are now deleted from the message
history entirely.</p></item>
history. Previews of videos are now shown directly in the message history,
and clicking on a video will open it in a larger viewer. Audio files are
now seekable in the improved audio file player. Edited messages are now
edited in place, with an icon to indicate the edited status, while
redacted messages are now deleted from the message history
entirely.</p></item>
</list>
</section>
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