Examples violate HIG
https://teams.pages.gitlab.gnome.org/Design/hig-www/guidelines/writing-style.html
Pronouns like “you” or “my” should be avoided wherever possible.
https://teams.pages.gitlab.gnome.org/Design/hig-www/feedback/dialogs.html
I have noted this issue several times from the current HIG to design concepts. Maybe it's something the team could keep an eye on. (It's really getting harder for me to do it right, if I see so many bad examples xD)
PS: Apart from that, the new HIG look great!
Edited by Sophie Herold