Commit dd1c5125 authored by Kat's avatar Kat

help: review

Comments added to the relevant files and some minor fixes.
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<title>Advanced Settings</title>
</section>
<!-- It is relatively traditional to have a troubleshooting section here. -->
</page>
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<email>sindhus@live.in</email>
<years>2013</years>
</credit>
<credit type="editor">
<name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
<email>kittykat3756@gmail.com</email>
<years>2013</years>
</credit>
<link type="guide" xref="index"/>
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</info>
<title>Introduction</title>
<!-- The application is called <app>Terminal</app> in the menu, so we should
use that instead of 'GNOME Terminal'. -->
<p>GNOME Terminal is a terminal emulator application that you can use to
access a UNIX shell environment and run any application available under the
GNOME Desktop environment.</p>
<p>GNOME Terminal is a terminal emulation application that you can use to access a UNIX shell environment and run any application available under GNOME Desktop environment.</p>
<p>GNOME <app>Terminal</app> emulates the xterm. In turn, xterm emulates a
text terminal with support for escape sequences that control cursor position
and colors.</p>
<p>GNOME <app>Terminal</app> emulates the xterm. In turn, xterm emulates a text terminal with support for escape sequences that control cursor position and colors.</p>
<!-- You are saying here that an emulator is emulating an emulator, which is a
bit confusing. Improve the first sentence, maybe even merging it into the
second one. -->
<table>
<tr>
<td>
<media type="image" src="figures/gnome-terminal.png" width="700">
<!-- The screenshot should be only of the application itself, not the whole
desktop. You can use the 'Take screenshot' application to automatically
take a screenshot only of the selected window. -->
<p>Screenshot of GNOME <app>Terminal</app></p>
</media>
</td>
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<!-- This page needs updating to reflect the new GPL and CC dual licence that we are using. -->
<legalnotice id="legalnotice">
<para>
Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this
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